Making the Grades: Kelly’s Unveiling

Kelly’s Unveiling is the first book in the Making the Grades series which is part of the Subconium Shared Universe. The book will be released as three novellas before being collected into a final complete edition. 

 

 

Plot

Making the Grades: Kelly’s Unveiling follows Kelly Spaihts, a junior at Eastern Tsuga College, who begins her semester facing academic challenges in Professor William Taylor‘s controversial psychology course. To boost her grades, Kelly agrees to an unconventional arrangement that leads her on a journey of personal discovery. What begins as a simple exchange for extra credit quickly spirals into a complex exploration of power dynamics, submission, and self-identity.

As Kelly navigates her evolving relationship with Professor Taylor, she becomes increasingly drawn into a world of psychological and sexual exploration, pushing the boundaries of her comfort zone and uncovering deeper desires. Throughout the story, Kelly must balance her academic ambitions, societal expectations, and her own desires, all while facing the risks associated with her growing involvement in the professor’s assignments.

The novel delves into themes of manipulation, control, and sexual awakening, all set against the backdrop of a college environment that encourages intellectual freedom yet harbors dark secrets. Kelly’s journey of self-discovery challenges her understanding of both herself and the world around her, leading to unexpected consequences as the semester progresses.

 

Background

Kelly’s Unveiling grew its roots on the choose your path erotic story site, CHYOA. In Jasper Flynn’s CHYOA story, Making the Grades, the first choice was to follow one of three characters: Kelly, Allie, or Heather. On that site, Kelly’s story was left unfinished after her streak across Strawbridge College‘s campus. Following rewrites, that part of the story made up roughly one-third of Kelly’s story, with the remaining two-thirds being completed for this novel.

The rewrites were significant. Some changes and additions:

• Kelly’s sorority became a society.
• The history of societies and orders was invented.
• The town of Verdant and the history were invented.
• Eastern Tsuga College and the history were invented.
• The supernatural aspects were added. 
• Kelly’s background was fleshed out.
• Professor Taylor’s background was fleshed out. 
• Mark Rogers was introduced including the history with Kelly.
• Bridgette Hutchinson was introduced.